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Long Promised Road

Prompt originally from AetherRoom.club
Created: 2021-03-28
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Description
After the end of the world, two girls struggle to reach the coast. One is focused on ensuring their survival, casting her humanity aside. The other has a broken leg, and shame at her weakness eats her soul. Dangers are ever-present, and conflicts fester within.
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Tags
dark, shame, vulnerability, psychological, third person, post-apocalyptic, codependence
Prompt
Aura watched the sky. It was ash-gray with smog and there was no sun. The earth beneath her feet was barren and dusty. Burnt sticks of trees stood in the distance. Aura heard the sound of one of them falling, a small quiet boom. She went back inside the shack. Sierra sat against the wall. She was skinnier than ever, skin pulled tight over bone. Looking at her, Aura found it hard to believe that she was once varsity track. Before, she was athletic and cheerful. Now, her broken leg in its rough cast was slow to heal, and her eyes were dull with resignation. Aura knelt beside her. "Are you okay?" she asked. Sierra closed her eyes and nodded. "Yes." Aura went into the cracked yellow tile kitchen and took a tin of peaches. She went back into the living room, squatted beside Sierra, took out her army knife, and cut it open. She offered the tin to Sierra. Sierra shook her head. "I'm not hungry." They both knew it was a lie. With a sigh, Aura ate some peaches. The sugar-sweet flavor filled her mouth, providing energy for another day. She offered Sierra the tin again after she ate half, and Sierra this time acquiesced, taking a single peach slice and bringing it to her mouth. It disappeared between her lips and she chewed it slowly. "Do you want water?" Aura asked. There was a long silence. Sierra looked at the wall for several moments, her eyebrows furrowed, her lips set in a tense frown. For a moment it seemed almost that she wanted to yell, to shout, to scream, but ultimately the conflict passed, leaving only a bleak look in her eyes. "Yes…thank you." Aura nodded and went outside. She grabbed the bucket by the door and walked to the well. She hooked the bucket, lowered it—then, she heard the hollow sound of the bucket hitting bottom. When she drew it up, there was only a little water within. Not much; not enough. They need to start moving again. Aura got up, trying to think of where to go. They were aiming for the coast: water, hope. But with Sierra's broken leg,... [Click to expand]
Aura watched the sky. It was ash-gray with smog and there was no sun. The earth beneath her feet was barren and dusty. Burnt sticks of trees stood in the distance. Aura heard the sound of one of them falling, a small quiet boom. She went back inside the shack.
Sierra sat against the wall. She was skinnier than ever, skin pulled tight over bone. Looking at her, Aura found it hard to believe that she was once varsity track. Before, she was athletic and cheerful. Now, her broken leg in its rough cast was slow to heal, and her eyes were dull with resignation. Aura knelt beside her.
"Are you okay?" she asked.
Sierra closed her eyes and nodded. "Yes."
Aura went into the cracked yellow tile kitchen and took a tin of peaches. She went back into the living room, squatted beside Sierra, took out her army knife, and cut it open. She offered the tin to Sierra.
Sierra shook her head. "I'm not hungry."
They both knew it was a lie. With a sigh, Aura ate some peaches. The sugar-sweet flavor filled her mouth, providing energy for another day. She offered Sierra the tin again after she ate half, and Sierra this time acquiesced, taking a single peach slice and bringing it to her mouth. It disappeared between her lips and she chewed it slowly.
"Do you want water?" Aura asked.
There was a long silence. Sierra looked at the wall for several moments, her eyebrows furrowed, her lips set in a tense frown. For a moment it seemed almost that she wanted to yell, to shout, to scream, but ultimately the conflict passed, leaving only a bleak look in her eyes. "Yes…thank you."
Aura nodded and went outside. She grabbed the bucket by the door and walked to the well. She hooked the bucket, lowered it—then, she heard the hollow sound of the bucket hitting bottom. When she drew it up, there was only a little water within. Not much; not enough. They need to start moving again. Aura got up, trying to think of where to go. They were aiming for the coast: water, hope. But with Sierra's broken leg,
Author Notes
(scripted) I wrote this as a chapter in a brutally realistic post-apocalyptic novel set in the wasteland that was once America. Survival is difficult, resources are slim. Sierra has a broken leg. Focus on Sierra's self-loathing and shame for her vulnerability. Detail Aura's ruthless obsession for keeping Sierra safe at the cost of other people's lives.
Memory
The story centers on two nineteen year old girls: Sierra and Aura. They are traveling through post-apocalyptic America on their way to the coast.
Aura is Sierra's childhood friend, and is quiet, intelligent, and ruthless. Aura has a strong will to survive and protect Sierra. Aura will do anything to ensure their survival, and will not hesitate to lie, steal, or kill. Aura has a battered pistol with five bullets, and an army knife.
Sierra is sensitive and empathetic. Sierra has a broken leg. Sierra hates being the kind of person who must rely on others, and has a festering resentment building within. Sierra is disturbed by Aura's increasing brutality. Sierra is ashamed of her weakness and vulnerability.
World Info
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  • past, history, relationship, childhood, friend, dependence, dependent, bully, bullied

    Aura and Sierra are childhood friends. Sierra was outgoing, popular, and vibrant, while Aura was quiet, introverted, and bullied. Historically, it was always Sierra who defended and took care of Aura. Now that the roles are reversed in the new world, Aura feels a small sense of sick satisfaction in seeing Sierra so weak.
  • America, wasteland, apocalypse, cataclysm, world, apocalypse

    After the Cataclysm, all of America became a dry, dusty wasteland. No one knows how the rest of world fared. Those who survived now scour the wasteland for meager rations, subsisting off canned food, thin animals, and worse.
  • coast, california, goal, destination, ocean, west, hope

    Aura and Sierra are trekking westward to the coast of California, operating on a blind hope that once they get there, they can commandeer some sort of boat and subsist off fish in the ocean. Neither of them know if the waters hold life, or even if the ocean still exists. Still, it's their only hope.
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