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The Obstacles to Peace

Prompt originally from AetherRoom.club
Created: 2022-05-07
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Description
A young paladin wracked by war is sent to finally begin the negotiations for peace between Heaven and Hell - she just has to deal with the other side including the very succubus who rejected her confession of love.
Inspired by good ol' NAI-chan derailing a playthrough of the Infernoland prompt, starting a years-long war in the middle of a themepark for some reason.
Tags
1st person, fempov, paladin, succubus, possibly nsfw, awkward reunion
Prompt
I heave a tired sigh, sitting in my tattered tent. Just looking around at my meager possessions - my battered armour, my chipped sword, my dented shield - is enough to make even my shoulders tremble with fatigue. I look up at the sky through the holes in the roof of my tent. The moon has just begun its descent over the horizon, and small flecks of sunlight appear far in the east. Five years; the rising of the sun will mark the fifth year I have been thrown onto the front lines of the Eternal Battle - or truly, since I threw myself onto the front lines. The years have not been kind to me, leaving my mind and body heavily scarred from the almost nonstop fighting just beyond Elysium's walls, though the last few weeks have honestly been the worst after I finally managed to defeat the demon's assault commander, Yngoth. I haven't eaten anything in days, my wounds are infected, and I'm generally exhausted. But my crusade against the demons assaulting Elysium have been completely successful. Where others paladins have failed, I have endured and overcome the challenges these demons send at us, though it has gained me a fearsome reputation as a murderous maniac. Hell, my own brothers and sisters in arm fear me just as much as the Demon Lords arrayed against the Heavenly City, calling me mad, deluded, and a few are even bold enough to label me a heretic. I would be angered by such things if they weren't possibly true. "What I wouldn't give for some damn sleep," I mutter to myself. I stand up from my cot, feeling my joints creak as I do so. After a quick stretch, I slip my arms through the straps of my armour and open up the tent flap. Sleep is for the weak, after all. Or at least for those whose sins are not forcing them to keep moving. As I step outside my tent, I'm rushed by a load of small, emaciated figures. I pat their heads, trying to force a smile onto my scarred face. The children surrounding me, both human and demon, do the same, many of them still bearing signs of wounds. Their clothes are tattered and torn, and their skin, where not covered in scales for the demons, are bruised and dirty from our rough living out in the wilderness. They're so thin that I can see every bone beneath their pale bodies. Despite this, they all seem happy to see me. The other paladins of my order have branded me insane, but I refuse to allow these children suffer the conseqeuences of a war they never asked for. Even if I cannot afford to repair my equipment or eat decently after spending my gold to take care of them, my heart continues to scream that I am doing the right thing. Seeing their faint smiles only confirms that lingering emotion. After making sure to affectionately pat the head of every child, I turn away from them and begin walking down the long, broken road that leads to the city of Elysium. My little camp here lies a full half-day's travel out from the Golden City's walls, and it took more than a few broken noses to get it set up even this close. I turn my gaze back towards the golden walls that surround Elysium and the gleaming armour of its sentries. They have all this opulence on display, but not a single shred of kindness to extend to the truly desperate. I grind my teeth together as I march towards Elysium's gate, more than ready to lash out if those pretentious guards annoy me again. My anger stems not only from the "Holy Capital's" blatant hypocrisy, but also the new orders that were sent to me late last night. Commander Coran desires to talk to me about "taking the first steps towards securing our long-fought-for peace," while also conveniently denying once again my request for actual supplies for the children under my care.... [Click to expand]
I heave a tired sigh, sitting in my tattered tent. Just looking around at my meager possessions - my battered armour, my chipped sword, my dented shield - is enough to make even my shoulders tremble with fatigue. I look up at the sky through the holes in the roof of my tent. The moon has just begun its descent over the horizon, and small flecks of sunlight appear far in the east.
Five years; the rising of the sun will mark the fifth year I have been thrown onto the front lines of the Eternal Battle - or truly, since I threw myself onto the front lines. The years have not been kind to me, leaving my mind and body heavily scarred from the almost nonstop fighting just beyond Elysium's walls, though the last few weeks have honestly been the worst after I finally managed to defeat the demon's assault commander, Yngoth.
I haven't eaten anything in days, my wounds are infected, and I'm generally exhausted. But my crusade against the demons assaulting Elysium have been completely successful. Where others paladins have failed, I have endured and overcome the challenges these demons send at us, though it has gained me a fearsome reputation as a murderous maniac. Hell, my own brothers and sisters in arm fear me just as much as the Demon Lords arrayed against the Heavenly City, calling me mad, deluded, and a few are even bold enough to label me a heretic. I would be angered by such things if they weren't possibly true.
"What I wouldn't give for some damn sleep," I mutter to myself. I stand up from my cot, feeling my joints creak as I do so. After a quick stretch, I slip my arms through the straps of my armour and open up the tent flap. Sleep is for the weak, after all. Or at least for those whose sins are not forcing them to keep moving.
As I step outside my tent, I'm rushed by a load of small, emaciated figures. I pat their heads, trying to force a smile onto my scarred face. The children surrounding me, both human and demon, do the same, many of them still bearing signs of wounds. Their clothes are tattered and torn, and their skin, where not covered in scales for the demons, are bruised and dirty from our rough living out in the wilderness. They're so thin that I can see every bone beneath their pale bodies. Despite this, they all seem happy to see me.
The other paladins of my order have branded me insane, but I refuse to allow these children suffer the conseqeuences of a war they never asked for. Even if I cannot afford to repair my equipment or eat decently after spending my gold to take care of them, my heart continues to scream that I am doing the right thing. Seeing their faint smiles only confirms that lingering emotion.
After making sure to affectionately pat the head of every child, I turn away from them and begin walking down the long, broken road that leads to the city of Elysium. My little camp here lies a full half-day's travel out from the Golden City's walls, and it took more than a few broken noses to get it set up even this close.
I turn my gaze back towards the golden walls that surround Elysium and the gleaming armour of its sentries. They have all this opulence on display, but not a single shred of kindness to extend to the truly desperate. I grind my teeth together as I march towards Elysium's gate, more than ready to lash out if those pretentious guards annoy me again.
My anger stems not only from the "Holy Capital's" blatant hypocrisy, but also the new orders that were sent to me late last night. Commander Coran desires to talk to me about "taking the first steps towards securing our long-fought-for peace," while also conveniently denying once again my request for actual supplies for the children under my care.
Author Notes
Focus on the awkwardness between myself and Nox, forced to negotiate the peace between Heaven and Hell even though she vowed to never see me again.
Memory
I am ${character.name}, a female paladin in service to Elysium, the capital of Heaven. I serve ${character.patron}, and have dedicated my life to upholding their ideals.
For the last five years, I have been forced to fight in the war between Heaven and Hell, also known as the Eternal Battle, and I have gained recognition for my prowess on the battlefield. Both the forces of Heaven and Hell fear my presence, referring to me as the "Mad Maiden of Malbolge," due to my violent actions there.
In truth, I detest this war and the divide between humans and demons. In an effort to curtail the effects of the Eternal Battle, I go out of my way to save and protect both human and demon children from the ravages of war.
The Commander of Elysium's Paladins has a new order for me - negotiate with the succubus Nox in order to finally end the Eternal Battle.
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  • I, ${character.name}, Mad Maiden of Malbogle, me

    ${character.description}
  • I, ${character.name}, Mad Maiden of Malbolge, Mad Maiden

    I am ${character.name}, a female paladin in service to ${character.patron}.
    I am feared by both Heaven and Hell due to my violence upon the battlefield, given the moniker "Mad Maiden of Malbolge" thanks to my hand in the slaughter that took place there. I am an outcast everywhere I go, except for the most elite or veteran of my paladin order, who all understand the trials I have faced, or have even faced them alongside me.
    I spend my time and money taking care of oprhaned children from the war, both human and demon. I resent the hatred that both races have for each other, and wish to bring the war to a close however I can. More than anything, I hate the part I have played in the war, and am often plagued by self-doubt or recrimination about my lack of any true, meaningful success.
  • ${character.patron}

    ${character.patron} is the god/goddess that I have dedicated my life to, the one whom I attempt to emulate in my life as a paladin.
  • Michael Coran, Paladin Coran, Commander Coran, Michael

    Michael Coran is the Commander of the Elysium Paladin Order. All paladins in the city, and therefore all paladins who enter the realm of Heaven, are expected to obey his every order to the best of their ability.
    Michael, however, does not care for this authority, and treats his fellow paladins as brothers and sisters, never giving a command he wouldn't stand beside them to accomplish.
    Michael Coran is a 6'2" tall man, heavily built from his many decades of fighting as a paladin. His age-lined face is covered in scars, with even more adorning the rest of his body. His dark grey hair is often slicked back with sweat from his tireless work to defend Elysium. While not considered handsome in the slightest, all the humans in Elysium, and even many demons who meet him upon the battlefield, are fond of him for his wide, unflinching smile.
  • Elysium, The Golden City

    Elysium is the capital city of Heaven, where humans who have earned the right to dwell within its hallowed streets during their lives. Its high, golden walls are said to be impervious to attack, and its angelic guards are rumoured to be the match of a thousand demons from hell. The only mortals able to walk within Elysium are the paladins, given this right so long as they swear to uphold its peace and fight against its enemies.
    The souls who dwell within Elysium, however beautiful they may be, are incredibly arrogant and self-centered. They view demons and even other humans - aside from the paladins - as lesser creatures. They look down in scorn upon those who challenge this opinion, something I have done many times.
  • Noxura Sanguinis, Nox, Noxura, Duchess of Stygia

    Noxura Sanguinis, who prefers to be called "Nox," is a succubus from Hell who used to work at the theme park Infernoland. It was there that I met her, when she served as my unenthusiatic guide around the park's attractions.
    Now, however, Nox has risen to great prominence in Hell thanks to her cunning mind and indiscriminate hand for assassinating people who get in her way. She is more than willing to use her demonic charms on people around her as well, making her quite the formidable opponent.
    I once confessed my love for Nox after we spent many weeks together in Infernoland, though she rejected me. She claimed "Humans and Demons are simply not made for each other, no matter how much you pretend different, paladin." Though I sent many letters to her throughout the years, she has responded only once, telling me in no uncertain terms that she will never see me again.
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