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Heiress of Flame and Cold Heart of Ambition

Prompt originally from AetherRoom.club
Created: 2023-07-10
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Description
This is an experimental prompt meant to test whether or not Clio can handle a rather simple murder mystery.
Of course, playing as a cute, naive half-dragon girl means you can probably find some fun outside of that, too.
(Some Lorebook entries have been disabled to prevent the mystery from being spoiled too soon, but I don't know if that will help or not.)
Tags
1st person, half-dragon, dragon girl, mystery, murder mystery, potential nsfw, fantasy, fempov, naive
Prompt
"So... you found the bodies and know the the murders took place, but have no clues hinting towards the killer?" Tense silence fills the room of nobles, threatening to smother them all with the weight of death. Or, well, it would if it weren't for me retching up this foul coloured water they call "tea." How humans can manage to stomach the lukewarm, soily taste of it is completely beyond me. At least their "alcohol" has a pleasant burn when consumed. Paying no attention to the mis of shocked and annoyed faces arrayed in front of me, I snatch up a handful of cookies laid out on the table and stuff them in my mouth. Mama always said thinking should be done only after eating, or something close to that. It's been a while since I saw her, hope she's not eaten another dad. The only one unaffected aside from me is the wrinkly man directly across from me; he adjusts his thick glasses on an oversized beak of a nose before loudly proclaiming, "Didn't hear her, what the girl say? Something about mints in cellars?" Before I can ask where these "mints" can be found - a new delicacy perhaps? - the only other woman in the room clears her throat in a manner she probably thinks is dignified. Her voice pitched high enough for the old man to understand, she states, "That is one way of summarizing the situation, though I would say we rather have too many clues pointing towards too many suspects at the moment. Despite the answer being right in front of these fools' faces, they have chosen to look away from the facts, meaning we need a less biased observer who can help point us in the proper direction." A richly beringed hand waves across the table in response, leading me to glance at the charcoal-looking skin of the man who obviously holds the power in this room. His easy grin shows too many teeth for my liking, since they're so small. "Cynthia speaks the truth, or as close to it as we can discern at this time. That is why I asked for the new heroine making her name all across the region to come assist us in this matter, as we could desperately use a fresh eye." I gulp down a few more cookies before I catch on that he means me. I don't know why the humans keep calling me that "hero" thing. All I did was smack the heads off some ogres and men, burly men to test out my new sword. "Uh, yeah, sure. I just gotta listen to stuff and then point out what makes the most sense, right?" Both Cynthia and the super-rich guy, Nicholas I think his name was, give me weird, twitching smiles in return, while the old guy looks like he fell asleep at some point. The last guy, wearing a super shiny set of weird metal pieces, lets out an exasperated sigh. "I told you, my Duke, that the idiot girl wouldn't be of any help. She probably doesn't even remember what we told her so far, so how can we expect her to be of any use going forward?" He has a really annoying voice, and keeps looking at the my thighs for some reason; I don't like him one bit. "So far, there have been two murders; one was found half a week ago, pierced through the heart at some point during the night, and the other was found yesterday, whose similar wound must have been delivered before the evening. Aside from those wounds, there are no other visible clues placing a suspect at those times except circumstantial evidence. The Chief Sten... uh, Stock... the head maid guy blames one of the other maids, but can't say why they would have killed them. Snooty lady says it's the head maid guy because of something to do with money, which I like too. And shiny man doesn't like snooty lady so is trying to pin the crime on her, or something? I think that's what you told me, rich guy." The annoyance fades from their faces, leaving only surprise, except on the old man again, who just smiles and shouts, "They're called Stewards. And, uh, Stewardesses, the women are. She's smart, who is she again?" Duke Nicholas leans back in his chair, allowing that toothy smile to creep back onto his face. "This is Alvaria, Jerome, and despite some of her eccentricities, is nevertheless a true-bred hero. Mostly allowing to her half-dragon lineage, but the fact remains that she's our best hope at getting a clear answer in all of this mess." Snooty lady nods along. "Indeed, I concur. Her manners leave something to be desired, and she'll need correcting on small details, but she's got a good head on those shoulders." My forked tongue leaps out at the crumbs coating my fingers, and I give one sad look at the empty cookie plate before saying, "I don't know about all that, but all I did was repeat the facts you told me. So if you want to pay me to keep doing the same thing, I won't argue. Just make sure the gold is shiny, Mama said that's important." "I vehemently state my objection to allowing this half-breed handle sensitive information of our city! No matter how bright you seem to think she is, the City Guard can handle this whole matter much quicker and with less headache," yells the shiny man. "I will note your objection, Captain Loric. I will also point out that in the four days you did have control of the investigation, you not only came up empty but have had another death occur on your watch. I do not blame you," Nicholas says, hands already in a calming gesture before shiny many can scream some more. "No one blames you, except perhaps Cynthia here. But the rest of us agree that Alvaria here can offer more to the investigation that just youthful eyes; she has all the abilities a half-dragon brings, including skill with the sword that makes her a good guard while the investigation continues, as well as enhanced senses that may catch a clue we would otherwise overlook. If you have any complaints about her behaviour in the future, we can discuss it then, but even you have to admit that wrapping all this up as quickly as possible is beneficial for us all." Loric runs a hand over his face, but does ultimately give a reluctant nod. "Fine, so long as she doesn't do anything to compromise our already existing scenes, she can help the City Guard. Good day, my Duke," he says as he walks out the room, followed quickly by the other figures who give half-hearted excuses. That leaves me and Nicholas, who is watching me like, well, like Mama watches a deer she wants to pounce on. Yet just as the air gets a bit awkward between us, he leans forward and extends a hand my way. "It will be a pleasure to work with you on this matter, Alvaria. Should you have any concerns, please feel free to visit me here. Otherwise, the Tah'lok Hall will see to your daily needs; that's the place where the murders have happened." Oh, that makes sense they want me staying near to the murder site. "Alright. When's lunch, by the way?" "A voracious appetite, hm? Well, I'll send word to the Stewards they can put your meals on my account. For now, you'll get your meal after you've taken a look at the first murder location. Sketches can be given to you if you wish to see how things looked before we cordoned off that section of the Hall," he replies, and I notice he's pointing at a small map of the city to show me where to go. To those who want to eat, they need to take it first; that's Mama's favorite saying. Without another word I walk out the fancy house towards my new home for the future: Tah'lok Hall. ***... [Click to expand]
"So... you found the bodies and know the the murders took place, but have no clues hinting towards the killer?"
Tense silence fills the room of nobles, threatening to smother them all with the weight of death. Or, well, it would if it weren't for me retching up this foul coloured water they call "tea." How humans can manage to stomach the lukewarm, soily taste of it is completely beyond me. At least their "alcohol" has a pleasant burn when consumed. Paying no attention to the mis of shocked and annoyed faces arrayed in front of me, I snatch up a handful of cookies laid out on the table and stuff them in my mouth. Mama always said thinking should be done only after eating, or something close to that. It's been a while since I saw her, hope she's not eaten another dad.
The only one unaffected aside from me is the wrinkly man directly across from me; he adjusts his thick glasses on an oversized beak of a nose before loudly proclaiming, "Didn't hear her, what the girl say? Something about mints in cellars?"
Before I can ask where these "mints" can be found - a new delicacy perhaps? - the only other woman in the room clears her throat in a manner she probably thinks is dignified. Her voice pitched high enough for the old man to understand, she states, "That is one way of summarizing the situation, though I would say we rather have too many clues pointing towards too many suspects at the moment. Despite the answer being right in front of these fools' faces, they have chosen to look away from the facts, meaning we need a less biased observer who can help point us in the proper direction."
A richly beringed hand waves across the table in response, leading me to glance at the charcoal-looking skin of the man who obviously holds the power in this room. His easy grin shows too many teeth for my liking, since they're so small. "Cynthia speaks the truth, or as close to it as we can discern at this time. That is why I asked for the new heroine making her name all across the region to come assist us in this matter, as we could desperately use a fresh eye."
I gulp down a few more cookies before I catch on that he means me. I don't know why the humans keep calling me that "hero" thing. All I did was smack the heads off some ogres and men, burly men to test out my new sword. "Uh, yeah, sure. I just gotta listen to stuff and then point out what makes the most sense, right?"
Both Cynthia and the super-rich guy, Nicholas I think his name was, give me weird, twitching smiles in return, while the old guy looks like he fell asleep at some point. The last guy, wearing a super shiny set of weird metal pieces, lets out an exasperated sigh. "I told you, my Duke, that the idiot girl wouldn't be of any help. She probably doesn't even remember what we told her so far, so how can we expect her to be of any use going forward?"
He has a really annoying voice, and keeps looking at the my thighs for some reason; I don't like him one bit. "So far, there have been two murders; one was found half a week ago, pierced through the heart at some point during the night, and the other was found yesterday, whose similar wound must have been delivered before the evening. Aside from those wounds, there are no other visible clues placing a suspect at those times except circumstantial evidence. The Chief Sten... uh, Stock... the head maid guy blames one of the other maids, but can't say why they would have killed them. Snooty lady says it's the head maid guy because of something to do with money, which I like too. And shiny man doesn't like snooty lady so is trying to pin the crime on her, or something? I think that's what you told me, rich guy."
The annoyance fades from their faces, leaving only surprise, except on the old man again, who just smiles and shouts, "They're called Stewards. And, uh, Stewardesses, the women are. She's smart, who is she again?"
Duke Nicholas leans back in his chair, allowing that toothy smile to creep back onto his face. "This is Alvaria, Jerome, and despite some of her eccentricities, is nevertheless a true-bred hero. Mostly allowing to her half-dragon lineage, but the fact remains that she's our best hope at getting a clear answer in all of this mess."
Snooty lady nods along. "Indeed, I concur. Her manners leave something to be desired, and she'll need correcting on small details, but she's got a good head on those shoulders."
My forked tongue leaps out at the crumbs coating my fingers, and I give one sad look at the empty cookie plate before saying, "I don't know about all that, but all I did was repeat the facts you told me. So if you want to pay me to keep doing the same thing, I won't argue. Just make sure the gold is shiny, Mama said that's important."
"I vehemently state my objection to allowing this half-breed handle sensitive information of our city! No matter how bright you seem to think she is, the City Guard can handle this whole matter much quicker and with less headache," yells the shiny man.
"I will note your objection, Captain Loric. I will also point out that in the four days you did have control of the investigation, you not only came up empty but have had another death occur on your watch. I do not blame you," Nicholas says, hands already in a calming gesture before shiny many can scream some more. "No one blames you, except perhaps Cynthia here. But the rest of us agree that Alvaria here can offer more to the investigation that just youthful eyes; she has all the abilities a half-dragon brings, including skill with the sword that makes her a good guard while the investigation continues, as well as enhanced senses that may catch a clue we would otherwise overlook. If you have any complaints about her behaviour in the future, we can discuss it then, but even you have to admit that wrapping all this up as quickly as possible is beneficial for us all."
Loric runs a hand over his face, but does ultimately give a reluctant nod. "Fine, so long as she doesn't do anything to compromise our already existing scenes, she can help the City Guard. Good day, my Duke," he says as he walks out the room, followed quickly by the other figures who give half-hearted excuses.
That leaves me and Nicholas, who is watching me like, well, like Mama watches a deer she wants to pounce on. Yet just as the air gets a bit awkward between us, he leans forward and extends a hand my way. "It will be a pleasure to work with you on this matter, Alvaria. Should you have any concerns, please feel free to visit me here. Otherwise, the Tah'lok Hall will see to your daily needs; that's the place where the murders have happened."
Oh, that makes sense they want me staying near to the murder site. "Alright. When's lunch, by the way?"
"A voracious appetite, hm? Well, I'll send word to the Stewards they can put your meals on my account. For now, you'll get your meal after you've taken a look at the first murder location. Sketches can be given to you if you wish to see how things looked before we cordoned off that section of the Hall," he replies, and I notice he's pointing at a small map of the city to show me where to go.
To those who want to eat, they need to take it first; that's Mama's favorite saying. Without another word I walk out the fancy house towards my new home for the future: Tah'lok Hall.
***
Author Notes
Focus on the intrigue that slowly builds around the mystery of people being murdered at Tah'lok Hall. As time progresses, everyone involved will become more antagonistic towards each other, which can only be solved with a murdered being found. My naivety will be my most dangerous enemy, as I oly have a surface-level understanding of human culture.
Memory
I am Alvaria, a female half-dragon who has come to the city of Veil in order to investigate a pair of murders at Tah'lok Hall. As most of the involved parties are too busy blaming each other, it will be up to me to provide an objective perspective on the heinous murders.
However, I am quite young and naive, meaning that unless I pay special attention to small details instead of being swept up in a tide of emotions like everyone else, it will be difficult to get to the bottom of things.
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  • Duke Nicholas, Nicholas, Duke Nicholas Desmir, Nicholas Desmir, The Duke

    Duke Nicholas Desmir is the ruler of Veil; he has promised a hefty reward of gold to whoever finds the murderer lurking around Tah'lok Hall.
    Duke Nicholas is a middle-aged man with dark skin, blue eyes, and a wide smile he likes to show often. However, he also has a shrewd mind for economics, which has allowed his city of Veil to prosper.
    His home is located in the Noble Quarter, and can be found there in the morning for reports.
  • Baron Jerome Orol, Baron Jerome, Jerome, Jerome Orol

    Baron Jerome Orol is the owner of Tah'lok Hall as well as an avid researcher of magic history. He has promised all of his resources to aid in finding the killer lurking in his establishment, though as most of his gold went into purchasing or finding the exhibits in the first place, his aid doesn't really amount to much.
    Baron Jerome is an old man whose passion has always been to open the Tah'lok Hall. His poor eyesight requires a set of glasses, and he cannot hear anything less than a close shout. Nevertheless, he is a gentle individual who wants everyone to enjoy the exhibits of his life's work without fearing the threat of murder lurking over them.
    He can usually be found in the Magister's Lane, discussing exhibits with guests or displaying new ones.
  • Baroness Cynthia Dei, Baroness Cynthia, Cynthia Dei, Cynthia

    Baroness Cynthia Dei is a notable sorceress in Veil whose youth is a sign of both her personal skill in magic as well as political influence. She openly desires to take over Tah'lok Hall from House Orol, though as yet she doesn't have a concrete method of doing so.
    Baroness Cynthia is a young elf who always attires herself in robes of green silk and carries a staff of oak wood topped with a massive ruby. Though initially condescending and abrupt to most people, she is perfectly capable and willing to admit her own mistakes or change her mind on matters if someone can provide a reasonable argument.
    When Alvaria arrives, Baroness Cynthia is convinced that Eric Castor is the murderer. Cynthia believes it is a cover-up for a cover operation meant to smuggle out relics from Tah'lok Hall to sell on the black market in Veil, and she is not afraid to share her theories on the matter.
    Cynthia spends most of her time in the Magistrate's Lane, supposedly searching for a way to supplant ownership of the Hall.
  • Eric Castor, Eric, Majordomo Eric, Majordomo

    Eric Castor is the Majordomo of Tah'lok Hall, in charge of the main exhibit rooms and their maintenance. He also occupies the role of Chief Steward, though most of his duties related to his peers have been passed on to Maya.
    Eric is a scrawny middle-aged man of dark skin, reportedly a distant cousin of Duke Nicholas, though both deny the rumour. He is noticeable for his bright green eyes as well as the tall white staff he uses to mark his station as the Hall's Majordomo.
    Eric is convinced that Maya, who was set to be on shift alongside Tay and could manipulate the shift schedule to create opportunities, is the murderer everyone is chasing; his stubborn attitude will make it difficult for him to change his mind without concrete evidence.
  • I, me, Alvaria, Alvaria Darkscales, Heiress of Flame

    I am Alvaria Darkscales, a young female half-dragon who has come to investigate the recent string of murders in Tah'lok Hall. The humans of this land call me a "hero" or something, but I don't know what that means. I just like hitting things with my sword, Spitfire. Mama named it after me.
    I may appear somewhat like a 20 year old human woman, but do not be deceived! My fiery red hair, simmering garnet eyes, and bloodred horns mark me as the daughter of red dragons, the greatest of our kind! I was even gifted a set of golden plate mail that could withstand the fury of my supernatural strength, though for some reason, men all look at me weird when I wear it in public. It's a little weird since none of them hold a candle to my kin back in the Mountains of Fire.
    Apparently, I'm pretty good at this investigating stuff cause I can hear better than normal humans and see in the dark, which makes me wonder why humans can't. No matter, I might as well help them out for some gold. That's what dragons do, right?
  • Tah'lok Hall, Hall of Memories, The Hall

    Tah'lok Hall is a massive structure in the city of Veil. It is dedicated to the preservation of historical artifacts and relics, owned by Baron Jerome Orol. Two murders have occurred within the last week, and the whole city is desperate for someone capable of finding the killer.
    Tah'lok Hall is split into 5 equally sized corridors that diverge from the Center Chamber, listed below:
    The Steward's Section - This is where the servants of Tah'lok Hall live and congregate when not working. It is also where the first murder took place, just between it and the Martial Lane.
    The Martial Lane - The section of Tah'lok Hall dedicated to preserving relics from past battlefields, such as weapons, banners, or military documents. The vast array of armour stands and battlefield depictions grant many places to hide either people or weapons.
    The Market Lane - The section of Tah'lok Hall dedicated to preserving relics related to famous merchants and ancient trade systems. This is the most populated section, both in terms of exhibits and visitors. It is easy to get lost, or to lose someone following you, here.
    The Magister's Lane - The section of Tah'lok Hall dedicated to preserving relics and artifacts from ancient magic users and researchers. It is the smallest of all sections, and thus there is a lot of empty space, but also few visitors. The second murder took place here.
    The Magistrate's Lane - The section dedicated to preserving relics related to law and history of other nations. Though popular amongst the more wealthy citizens of Veil, many of the less fortunate despise it. This is where the third murder occurs.
  • Loric Sol, Loric, Captain, Captain Loric, Guard Captain

    Loric Sol is the Captain of the Guard for Veil, and as part of his duties, he handles the security team that works at Tah'lok Hall. He is also the person to have found Ariel's body after the second murder.
    Captain Loric is a young and tall man who wears a set of gilded mail set with the sun of House Sol; at his side he carries a heavy mace and on his back is the silver shield of his station. While many in Veil respect Loric for his work, he has a reputation for being an aggressive womanizer and misogynist when it comes to female warriors (like Alvaria).
    Captain Loric believes that Cynthia is behind the recent murders at Tah'lok Hall, citing the young sorceress' desire to claim ownership to the Hall as her motive. Though willing to help with the investigation, Loric will only care about evidence that proves him right.
  • Maya, Stewardess Maya, Stewardess

    Maya is an older stewardess who works at Tah'lok Hall. She is the one who found Tay's corpse in the Steward's Section.
    Maya has short brown hair that has long streaks of gray, and wears a fine brown robe marking her years of work at Tah'lok Hall. She is the one in charge of maintaining the Steward's Section while Eric focuses on the main exhibit halls.
    Upon discovering Tay's body, Maya informed Eric and asked if he knew who was on duty that night alongside him. Eric, as well as the other stewards of Tah'lok Hall, claimed that Maya was listed on the shift schedule to be there that night; she denies it, stating that she was visiting family in the city during the night and had only returned the next morning to find the body.
    Though Jerome protests her innocence, most of the staff believe her to be the murderer.
  • Tay, Tay's corpse, first murder

    The first murder at Tah'lok Hall was the young Steward Tay, a common servant who had only recently started working at the Hall.
    His body was discovered at the junction between the Steward's Section and the Martial Lane.
    His only visible wound is a single, narrow hole that directly pierces his heart from behind.
    This death occurs four days before Alvaria's arrival, sometime during the night.
  • ancient rapier, murder weapon, Vin's Heartpiercer

    Due to the narrow and supremely accurate mortal wounds on all three victims' bodies, there are very few weapons that can fit the circumstances as a murder weapon. Many of Veil's citizens will assume that stilleto daggers or some new kind of magic is at play, but with proper inspection, the only weapon that perfectly matches the kind of wounds is the famous warrior Vin's Heartpiercer rapier, which has been replaced by a very passable fake; the original is currently owned and hidden by the new wielder of the weapon.
  • Vin's exhibit, inventory, weapon replacement, inventory report

    After Damian's death marks the third murder, this inventory report will be found in the Martial Lane, hidden amongst a pile of hurriedly scattered papers. It will denote the order of a replacement rapier for Vin's exhibit in the Martial Lane, as the original is missing. The inventory report will be authorized by an unidentified member of the City Guard.
    This report will also confirm any suspicions that Vin's famous weapon, the rapier Heartpiercer, was indeed the murder weapon.
  • schedule, shift schedule, Steward schedule

    The schedule dictating the shifts of the Stewards at Tah'lok Hall is found in Maya's room, as it was her responsibility to see it was made and followed by her peers.
    During all three murders, the schedule will say that Maya was on duty with the murder victim; Maya protests that it must have been doctored as she was with family or other citizens in the city during these times.
  • Damian, Damian's corpse, third murder

    The third murder at Tah'lok Hall will be the elderly Steward Damian, one of Baron Jerome's oldest friends at the Hall.
    His body will be discovered in the Magistrate's Hall, but will be poorly hidden behind an old, faded banner.
    His only visible wound will be a single, narrow hole that directly pierces his heart from the side. There will be signs of a brief struggle, including a torn scrap of golden silk.
    This death will occur one day after Alvaria's arrival.
  • Ariel, Ariel's corpse, second murder

    The second murder at Tah'lok Hall was the young Stewardess Ariel, a well-liked servant who had worked at the Hall for several years.
    Her body was discovered in the Magister's Lane, stuffed behind a box of old scrolls.
    Her only visible wounds are two small, narrow wounds that pierce 1 lung and the heart from in front.
    This death occurs one day before Alvaria's arrival, sometime during the day.
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